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行文较为流畅，作者文中过渡词使用的不错；作者应适量增加从句的使用量；高级词汇比较灵活，但文中拼写错误稍多。
The annual summer vacation is coming and the children could alleviate ther mood in the light of own etite.In my perspctive,art museum is the best option.It has two advantages-enhance the thinking ability and enrich ther knowledge. The material is suitable for kids on diplay at th museum of the specific characteristics of image considering,befriends them to mae the contribtion between the concrete physical objects abstact oncepts,which both for the to replenish more episteme and review the exciting knowlede .
