字数:200满分:100分
采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;能够很好的使用长难句且句法很棒;文章高级词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富。
As is vividly demonstrated in the drawing above, Confucius is sitting together with three young people, who are living in the age of computer, and exchanging views in a relaxing way. What is conveyed in the picture is most profound and thought-provoking. The main purpose of the painter can be interpreted in terms of importance of traditional culture. Firstly, Chinese traditional culture has rich historical value. As the crystallization of thousands of years of wisdom and creativity, the traditional Chinese culture is important carriers of historical development and progress. Furthermore, because the traditional culture is a source of inspiration for modern art, preserving them will not only serve to protect the past of Chinese culture, but also help to solidify its future. Secondly, the traditional culture is a part of the Chinese identity of nation as well as a great source of national pride. Protecting Chinese traditional culture will ensure that the sense of identity and pride will be kept, and help to foster solidarity and unity among the Chinese people. China must preserve and develop its culture and promote exchange between civilizations to make the world a better place.