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小学二年级英语作文:Our house

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:49浏览次数:5584
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用英语描述下自己的家,字数在100字以内.
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文中词汇表达灵活性要提高,希望能较熟练地使用高级词汇;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;文中基本没有过渡词和衔接词,建议增加衔接词汇的积累。

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My house is a medium apartment. It looks simple, but shows warm. We called it "Mother's Arms". My parents and I lives here. This is the sitting room. It is big. There are sofas, a tea table, a big side table and a smaller one. There is a dinner-table on the right hand and a piano on the left hand. We do the entertainment and have dinner here.This is my parents' room. It is nice. It has a large bed. It can holds three people. This is my room. It is smaller than my parents' room. I called it "Steph's Base", because it has all my memories and my equipment in here. Besides, it looks very "IKEA". Most of furniture are bought from "IKEA". Their comfortable designing style contracted me a lot. This is our house. Our comfortable "Mother's Arms". We love it.

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