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小学二年级英语作文:Our house

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:49浏览次数:5597
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用英语描述下自己的家,字数在100字以内.
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正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;文章词汇表达要更加熟练,希望能更多使用一些高级词汇;建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用。

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My house is a medium apartment. It looks simple, but shows warmth. We called it "Mother's Arms". My parents and I live here. This is the sitting room. It is big. There are sofas, tea table and side table. There is a dinner-table on the right hand and a piano on the left hand. Our sitting room is the place for entertainment and dinner.This is my parents' room. It is nice. There is a large bed. It can hold three persons. This is my room. It is smaller than my parents' room. I called it "Steph's Base", because it is full of my growing-up memories. Moreover, it looks very "IKEA". The most furniture is bought from "IKEA". Their designing style contracted me a lot. This is our house, our comfortable "Mother's Arms". We love it.

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