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Well let's speak my friend. On the life, I have a lot of friends. But only one people is my best friend. Her name is Zhaoyaqing and she is the same of the shcool. She's Chinese. And she has a very long hair,then she has a pair of the beautiful eyes. She often help us. She like me, and l like her, too. I think, between the friend is help each other,then have a kind of heart!