小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；单词拼写做的很棒，还请注意增加词汇的积累；全文结构较为严谨，应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。

Well let's speak my friend. On the life, I have a lot of friends. But only one person is my best friend. Her name is Zhaoya and she is the same of the school. She's Chinese. And she has a very long hair,then she has a pair of the beautiful eyes. She often help other students. Her like me, and l like her, too. I think, between the friend. help each other,then have a kind of heart!