单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;全文结构较为严谨,应适当增加文中衔接词的使用。
Well let's speak my friend. On the life, I have a lot of friends. But only one person is my best friend. Her name is Zhaoya and she is the same of the school. She's Chinese. And she has a very long hair,then she has a pair of the beautiful eyes. She often help other students. Her like me, and l like her, too. I think, between the friend must help each other,then have a kind of heart!