文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;全文结构较为严谨。
Well let's speak my friend. On the life, I have a lot of friends. But only one person is my best friend. Her name is Zhaoya and she is the same of the school. She's Chinese. And she has a very long black hair,then she has a pair of the beautiful eyes. She studies very well, she is often help her classroom in her class. Her like me, and l like her, too. I think, between the friend must help each other,then have a kind of heart!