文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;若加强一些复杂句和从句的使用,文章会更棒;全文结构较为严谨。
Well let's speak my friend. On the life, I have a lot of friends. But only one person is my best friend. Her name is Zhaoya and she is the same of the school. She's Chinese. And she has a very long black hair,then she has a pair of the beautiful eyes. She studies very well, she is often help her classroom in her class. She is good to me, of course,I also is very good to her. I think, between the friend must help each other,then have a kind of heart!