文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
Well let's speak my friend. On the life, I have a lot of friends. But only one person is my best friend. Her name is Zhaoya and she is the same of the school. She's Chinese. And she has a very long black hair,then she has a pair of the beautiful eyes. She studies very well, she is often help her classroom in her class. She is good to me. Of course,I also is very good to her. I think that friends should help each other, not intrigue,everyone should have a kind heart!