文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;衔接成分太少,文章结构欠佳。
Well let's speak my friend. On the life, I have a lot of friends. But only one person is my best friend. Her name is Zhaoya and she is the same of the school. She's Chinese. And she has a very long black hair,then she has a pair of the beautiful eyes. She studies very well, she is help her classroom in her class. She is good to me. Of course,I am very good to her. I think that friends should help each other, not intrigue,everyone should have a kind heart!