2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

采用了恰当的衔接手法，层次清晰；复杂句使用不错，句法规范；文中词汇表达灵活多样，高级词汇的使用还需加强。

My hometown,Guangzhou is a culture-multiplied city where has uncountable intereting places above which the Pearl River is undoubtly the most attractive.I'll surely take you to go boating on the Pearl River and have a big meal on the facinating ship where all kinds of delicioius food will be provided.In speaking of the reason why I choose the Pearl River,is that you can appreciate beautiful scenery at night when the lights beside roads all on. What's more,there will be some liberal musicians put down there instruments,holding small concerts just behind the river.Listening to pleasing music performed by those people,seeing magically beautiful scene and enjoying delicious meals,are so amazing that I even can't wait you getting here.Welcome to my hometown,Guangzhou,I'm looking forward to your coming.