2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

作者有一定功底，可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆；采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；文中词汇表达较丰富恰当，高级词汇使用稍显不足。

I'm very glad that you are going to visit my hometown.I hope you have a good time there. As we know,my hometown is a beautiful place and has a lot of kind people.and We all will be breath fresh air when you climb the small mountain.Of course,you eat kinds of food in the mountain.it's delicious for everyone.If you walk the narrow road in the country,you will find this view is attractive and never forget to spent on this day, obviliously,this is a very different place with a number of people in the city.no pollution and no noise,you will see the blue sky while you lie in the file,that is so pleased. I think I can't wait you to come here.