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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13034
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分79.0分
评语:

句法知识很棒,若增加一些从句的使用,文章会更出色;文章高级词汇使用熟练,词汇表达较为丰富;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

用户练习作文:

The importance of communication is obvious. Without communication, the world cannot go well in one single day. With communication, all the fights, conflicts, and even most horrible crimes can come into peace in on single day. That, is the power and usage of communication. We can communicate with variety of people in several different ways. But the purpose of this is always the same. We try to achieve our goals and ensure each other's opinion by communication. When it happens smoothly, everything become promising. Otherwise, we will see the quarrels, battles, and even terrorists coming. We all want peace and happy life. To accomplish this aim, we should start to communicate with others but not hit others physically. To make the future brighter, we should try to communicate with others but not hurt others literally. To promise our children a better life, now, from this moment shall we our commit to be a communicable person but not bully.

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