2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

过渡词很丰富，衔接词同时使用的恰到好处；可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用；文章词汇表达比较灵活，高级词汇的使用要继续加强。

Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will As we all know,every successful person has the strong will.To other words,if one person wants to become successful,he must have a strong will. At first,if the person who has no strong will,he will give up when he is in trouble.However,in this world,every thing is not easy to do.If you always fear the difficulty,you will do nothing.So the people can do everything they want to do successfully who have the strong will.Of course,only they can complete the great mission. Then,as students,we also need the strong will,because there are too many troubles in the study,too.That is said that if we want to become the useful man and get more useful knowledge,we must learn harder and harder with our strong will.If we do not have this important thing,we will be the failing people,even we will have nothing in the life.After all,this world is so difficult that we must do our better and better to make the life more beautiful and happier.Therefore,the strong will is essential.