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SiChuan is my homtown ,I love her!If you come to china,I will introduce my hometown to you and take you to here. First,there is so much food to eat.Toufu is my favorite food,it is so soft.I believe that you will like it.Second,SiChuan is so beatiful!There are many panda,so cute!Finally we are so frindly for guest. I cant wait for it soon.