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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46231
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;从句使用很不错,再接再厉;作者能较多样地使用词汇,高级词汇的使用也比较灵活。

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As is depicted in the chart,we can draw a conclusion that higher educations is related to a higher earnings.According to the survey,people with Doctoral degrees have less posibility to be unemployed while those with less than high school diplomas are much more possible to be unemployed.It undoubtfully has become a worrying problem that more and more people lose their job,discarded by the community.Based on the result reflected by the survey,the main reason is the lack of education. The more one is educated,the more likely he would have a good job with admirable salary.To sum up,we should highlight the significant statue of education,that is to say,we should try our best to draw people's attention to educantion which is the key to have a job.Nowadays,to be well-educated is an unavoidable trend.All of us should grab the chance to improve ourselves,only through which we can get our promising future with no economical difficulties.

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