2008年考研英语作文真题:你一条腿，我一条腿，你我一起，走南闯北

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；很好的运用了从句，但部分句子稍有瑕疵；文中词汇表达灵活多样，高级词汇使用熟练，但拼写错误要注意。

As is illustrated in the picture, two disabled persons whose cripped legs are bound together do a lot of traveling .Accordingly ,this far-reaching picture reflects a common phenomenon in today's society : the people who are in the dark want to turn corner but they can not make it respectively and in turn they has to choose to pull together in times of trouble . there are several reasons accounting for this .Since we have to live in an on-the-move lifestyle,we may encounter various plight ,where we should be at a loss rather than to seek for other's assistance .Furthermore ,if we do not offer help to each other when we confront dilemma, we should not realize our dream .And no issue in china is as basic to build up the society in harmony as to conduct coordination in face of disasters. Juding from what have been argued above ,people have come to realize the role of mutul aid .It is ,therefore,necessary that some effective steps be made to advocate the spirit of supporting each other .to begin with the government should make laws to encourage people to unite ,in addition people should enhance the awareness of caring each other especially when they are in trouble ,only in those ways can we make people ,even not being acquaintance ,help each other.