文章衔接手法恰当;文中用词稍显贫乏,单词拼写还要加强;句式变化较为丰富。
my good friend is a beautiful girl , she like travel and see movies , we want have a short trip next week . wash have a nice day . she have a litter sisiter and brother , have a good care for they , a nice girl friendship is a great work .i love her