小学一年级英语作文:My New Teacher

语句间的衔接成分用的不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；丰富的使用了长难句；文中词汇表达稍欠丰富，另外请重视拼写检查。

Today,come a new teacher teach our English,she have a beautiful eyes and long black hair,wear a pink coat and black skirt. She always smile and keep a slowly talk make we can linsten clearly what she say.she play with us after class over.we all like play with she,like our sister,she is a prefect woman.