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2012年12月英语四级作文真题:Education pays

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:48浏览次数:46262
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2012年12月英语四级作文材料来源于美国劳工部网站的一份统计表,本次作文材料截取了其中一部分数据,并对时间做了修改,以下为材料原型,供大家参考。
Education pays...
Education pays in higher earnings and lower unemployment rates
Note: Data are for persons age 25 and over. Earnings are for full-time wage and salary workers.

Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.

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采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;很好的运用了从句,但部分句子稍有瑕疵;请作者增加词汇量的积累,同时注意词汇拼写的检查。

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It is normal to thought that the higher education,the highter earning, so much people try to get much highter education and preants looking forward their children get more education ,but the factor is ture? According to a date of American labor site,the people who get the lowest education get the lowest earning and it also much more than any other people.The people whoes education degree less than associate the average median weekly earning is less than $797. However the professional degree just 2.4 precent of all the average high to $1665,become the highest earning.So ist is ture that the higher education you get the higher earning you get expect the hightest education-doctoral degree less a little than professional degree.

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