Source: Bureau of Labor Statistics, Current Population Survey.
采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;很好的运用了从句,但部分句子稍有瑕疵;请作者增加词汇量的积累,同时注意词汇拼写的检查。
It is normal to thought that the higher education,the highter earning, so much people try to get much highter education and preants looking forward their children get more education ,but the factor is ture? According to a date of American labor site,the people who get the lowest education get the lowest earning and it also much more than any other people.The people whoes education degree less than associate the average median weekly earning is less than $797. However the professional degree just 2.4 precent of all the average high to $1665,become the highest earning.So ist is ture that the higher education you get the higher earning you get expect the hightest education-doctoral degree less a little than professional degree.