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内容：本人在12月15日到22日在纽约举行的展览会期间了解到贵公司产品号为5670的新产品，非常感兴趣，请贵方发给我们一份价格单和说明书。感谢贵方的合作，希望我们可以建立贸易关系。
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1．price list and instruction价格单和说明书
2．establish business relationship建立贸易关系
作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间；可适当增加复杂句和从句的使用；文章结构欠严谨，基本没有衔接成分。
Dear Sir/Madam I'm Hubin from Guangdong XXX factory. Nice to know your new product 5670 after I joined newYork exhibition on Dec.15 to22,I want to know more about this productions , would you pls send me price list and instruction. maybe we may establish business relationship. here is my email address Hubing@163.com. and my telephone number is 1234567. I am looking forward to your feedback. thanks and best Regards Hubin
