可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;全文结构较为严谨;作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练,单词拼写方面要更仔细。
As is human nature,people always make a conclusion immediately by what they see and what they hear.However,it's wrong to make a conclusion about something at once when they see it and hear it at that time. On the one hand,the proceedings of something go for a long time,and when we spot one part of the proceedings,we conclude that this thing is wrong.For example,some unproveable news publish in the wechat by someone.He told everyone that the government did a bad thing and this news is proved untruth.During the time when people spread the untruth news,people's imprssion towards government turns bad,destroying the governmen's belief and authority. On the other hand,we will mistake other's act.For instand,a girl,wearing a small white bag without locking.,is taking a bus.Suddenly a poor young man thrust into her.She was angry and scold the poor man.After taking off the bus,she knew that a thief dressing gentlely wanted to steal her wallet.When the poor man saw that,he informed her by this way.It's disturbing to think that we mistood a good person. In conclusion,it's wrong to judge something at once according to what we see and what we hear at that time.It's advised to judge someting by exploring the truth.
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