可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;全文结构较为严谨;作者能较灵活地使用词汇,高级词汇使用较恰当,但存在一些拼写错误。
As is human nature,people always make a conclusion immediately by what they see and what they hear.However,it's wrong to make a conclusion about something at once when they see it and hear it at that time. On the one hand,the proceedings of something go for a long time,and when we spot one part of the proceedings,we conclude that this thing is wrong.For example,some unproven news published in the wechat by someone.He told everyone that the government did a bad thing and this news is proved untruth.During the time when people spread the untruth news,people's impression towards government turns bad,destroying the government's belief and authority. On the other hand,we will mistake other's act.For instantance,a girl,wearing a small white bag without locking.,is taking a bus.Suddenly a poor young man thrust into her.She was angry and scold the poor man.After taking off the bus,she knew that a thief dressing gentlely wanted to steal her wallet.When the poor man saw that,he informed her by this way.It's disturbing to think that we mistood a good person. In conclusion,it's wrong to judge something at once according to what we see and what we hear at that time.It's advised to judge someting by exploring the truth.
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