拼写很棒,可适当增加高级词汇的使用;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。
As is human nature,people always make a conclusion immediately by what they see and what they hear.However,it's wrong to make a conclusion about something at once when they see it and hear it at that time. On the one hand,the proceedings of something go for a long time,and when we spot one part of the proceedings,we conclude that this thing is wrong.For example,some unproven news published in the wechat by someone.He told everyone that the government did a bad thing and this news proved untruth.During the time when people spread the untruth news,people's impression towards government turns bad,destroying the government's belief and authority. On the other hand,we will mistake other's act.For instance,a girl,wearing a small white bag without locking.,is taking a bus.Suddenly a poor young man thrust into her.She was angry and scolded the poor man.After taking off the bus,she knew that a thief dressing generously wanted to steal her wallet.When the poor man saw that,he informed her by this way.It's disturbing to think that we mistook a good person. In conclusion,it's wrong to judge something at once in accordance with what we see and what we hear at that time.It's advised to judge something by exploring the truth.
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