2011年12月英语四级作文真题:坚强的意志

可适当增加从句和复杂句使用；恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；能较灵活地使用部分高级词汇，有基础拼写错误，需要注意一下。

It is said that nothing succeds without a strong will,on which I couldn't agree more.For one thing,a strong will is the significant confirm of success.Without a strong will,we won't overcome obstacles on our way to success.For another,only the one who is equipped with a tough will can finish tough work which normal person have no abilities to do.There are trivial things and complicated things in the world,however,most people can only do the latter,just a few people with strong wills have confidences in doing these.This view is everywhere and is suitable for anyone.As for our students,this view is also proper for our study.If we didn't try hard to study,we wouldn't become useful people.In conclusion,more attention should be attained to cultivate a strong will.