文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;文章层次较为清晰;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意个别句子错误。
I like my new teacher very much. She is treat nice to me, and she also teach me a lot. she always teach us to love our parents and doing our duty. I wish I can see her every day. she always help that students who do not like study and accompany with them to study