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恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词，衔接手法做的很棒；文中应适当增加从句和长难句的使用；文中词汇表达方面较丰富灵活，但在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。
It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket,as the saying goes.People usually do something without thoughtful result in failure of opportunities.The folksay is given us daily experience and more wisdom that we could make more logical and sensible decisions for our future. For example,we should get more informations and details in order to make a good plan and decisions but never always cause a smooth.We have to give up when we encouter inevitable and tremendous difficulty .At that time, everything we are worried about, including dealine time,huge prices and limited energy, will take a back seat.However, if we think about another spare project to prevent our missing, we will not put all eggs in one basket.In fact, people who really know how to invest all know not to put all eggs in one basket. In my opinion,Never put all eggs in one basket. It's too risky.Therefore,I tell you to "put all your eggs in one basket, and then watch that basket. " Look round you and take notice, men who do that not often fail.
