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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第2套):鸡蛋放到一个篮子

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:11浏览次数:10396
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题目:It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket.把全部鸡蛋放到一个篮子里是不明智的。
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可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;文章词汇使用较为恰当灵活,希望能更熟练地使用高级词汇恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒。

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It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket,as the saying goes.People usually do something without thoughtful result in failure of opportunities.The folk say is given us daily experience and more wisdom that we could make more logical and sensible decisions for our future. For example,we should get more information and details in order to make a good plan and decisions but never always be smooth.We have to give up when we encounter inevitable and tremendous difficulty.At that time, everything we are worried about, including dealine time,huge prices and limited energy, will take a back seat.However, if we think about another project to prevent our missing, we will not put all eggs in one basket.In fact, people who really know how to invest all know not to put all eggs in one basket. In my opinion,Never put all eggs in one basket. It's too risky.Therefore,I tell you to "put all your eggs in one basket, and then watch that basket. " Look round you and take notice, men who do that not often fail.

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