单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;建议加强积累过渡词和衔接词的积累,文章结构不严谨;从句数量不足。
I have a good friend. She is a beautiful girl,she have a long hairs.she is ten years old this year. She likes sing and dance. She lives in Shenzhen same as me. we are neighbour. She is a 2 class student.I is a 3 Class student. She goes to school on foot with me every day.