小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；文中词汇表达贫乏，但是单词拼写做的不错；建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。

I have a good friend. She is a beautiful girl,she has a long hairs,she is ten years old this year. She likes singing and dancing. She lives in Shenzhen same as me. We are neighbour. She is a 2 class student.I am a 3 Class student. She goes to school with me on foot every day.