单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;正确句子比例很高,但需多多加强从句的使用;建议在衔接词汇方面加强积累。
I have a good friend. She is a beautiful girl,she has a long hair,she is ten years old this year. She likes singing and dancing. She lives in Shenzhen same as me. We are neighbour. She is a 2 class student and I am a 3 Class student. She goes to school with me on feet every day.