简单句型过多,从句使用不熟练;文中词汇表达多样性不足,在高级词汇方面尤其要多积累;文章层次较为清晰。
My good friend is beautiful girl comes from DongBei District. She is very smart and diligent. She has short hairs, big eyes and brown skin which show her very healthy. Her hobby is very wide like jogging,basketball,singing and so on. She is a good student since primary school. I met her at university. She made a boyfriend when she was a freshman and now they get married.