建议适当增加些复杂句的使用;文章词汇表达比较灵活,高级词汇的使用要继续加强;文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词。
Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling Nowadays,more and more students think that the spelling is not important when they learn English.They think that they know the words' meaning is very good.However that is not a good thing. There are some reasons.At first,the students learn English in the school is just for the exam.So they find that they can choose the right answer is successful.To the other words,whether they know the words right spelling doesn't matter.Then,they write the essay in English just on the exam writing too so that they could only know these words which they use them often.Last but not least,they don't realize how important English is. To change this,I think teachers should let student use English write and say more.In English class,they have to use English to answer the questions and after the class they should write a diary in English every day.