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why to put all eggs in one basket is unwise? Apparantly, because when one put all his eggs in one basket that equally means he puts all possibilities on just one thing. There is no need to say that it is very dangerous. It takes too much risks. To put all eggs in one basket is very risky for if you accidently droped the basket, all your eggs will broken. Then you lose all your eggs, all you property. To use stock market as an example, if you invest all your money into just one stock, and the stock index down to the bottom, then you will lose all your money. Undoubtedly, it's very horrible. what we should do is to put our eggs, money, risk in several different basket, stock and things to ensure that we will guarantee our property when those things broken. as the saying goes, "It is unwise to put all eggs in one basket." I totally agree with it. Meanwhile, I hold the opinion that we should learn to spread possibilities in different areas in order to deminish the risk of failure in minimum.
