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more and more students are carrying their own smart phones with them, which really disturbs their study life at school. As far as I am concerned, I hold the point of view that each coin has two sides. On the one hand, young children can not be separated from the development of science and technology. On the other hand, young kids are not good at how to control themselves and how to spend their time wisely. In my opinion, if the teachers and parents can help them to form the good habit of using cell-phones, it will be acceptable for the students to carry their cellhpnes. Therefore, with the developement of society, we students must be together with us .
