文章组织结构良好;加强局势的变化,会取得更好的成绩;高级词汇的使用希望还能更熟练一些,拼写检查还需加强。
it's well konwn that xi'an is one of the most historical and abstractive cities in china. there are many tourists visiting this beautiful place every year. if i have a forigen firend who is willing to have a trip, i will recommend xi'an to her/him. there is no denying that xi'an has a large number of ancient cultural relics, in Han Danystiy,