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it's well known that xi'an is a historical and abstractive city in China. there are many tourists visiting this beautiful place every year. if i have a forigen friend who want to have a trip, i will recommend xi'an to her/him. there is no denying that xi'an has a large number of ancient cultural relics, in Han Danystiy,