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2013年考研英语作文预测话题:沟通的意义

发布时间:2013-08-23 17:28浏览次数:13034
要求:

题目要求:

围绕沟通的意义写一篇小文章。简明阐述自己的观点。

字数要求:

200字以内

用户的作文(系统评分68.0分
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作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒;作者词汇表达较丰富准确,不过高级词汇的积累还有很大的空间。

用户练习作文:

As we all know,communication is the basic of social.We communicate so that we can know other's thoughts and emotions.If they are happy,we can continue the topic we are talking about.If not,we'd better shut up and change the topic.As a result of that,people can get on well with each other and life won't be filled with fighting and anger. And communication also play a great part in the last of human.Language has a magic power.People select their couple by face,money and character.But how can we know the man or woman who sit opposite of us.There is no doubt that we have to communicate with him or she so that we can know if the man or weman is the one you are going to live together with. So communication is very important in human society.No communication,no society,no human.

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