2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

如若增加一些长难句的使用，会为文章添彩；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨；文章词汇表达多样性不足，不过词汇拼写要再接再厉。

Greating a Green Campus It is very improtant to great a green campus.If a country want to be strong,the young people are very improtant.If a young person want to be useful,the school which he live in is very improtant. Of course,the green campus is not just the green environment.It also includes the green friendship and the green education.To the other words,in the campus,everything is green.The green means a hramonious environment which stdents can live in it happily and study well.The teachers and students who are in the green campus are very good and do the study hardly. But what can we do for this? To creat this green campus,first,we should keep the environment clean and do our best on the class.Then,we should help others if they are in some troubles.Last but not least,we shold improve us as far as possible,not only the knowledge but also the soul.