2009年12月英语四级作文真题:建设绿色校园

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者能较熟练、灵活地使用词汇，建议要多使用高级词汇；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。

Greating a Green Campus It is very important to great a green campus.If a country wants to be strong,the young people are very important.If a young person wants to be useful,the school which he live in is very important. Of course,the green campus is not just the green environment.It also includes the beautiful friendship and the good education.To the other words,on campus, everything is green.The green means a harmonious environment which stdents can live in it happily and study well.The teachers and students who are in the green campus are very good and do the study hardly. But what can we do for this? To create this green campus,first,we should keep the environment clean and do our best on the class.Then,we should help others if they are in some troubles.Last but not least,we should improve us as far as possible,not only the knowledge but also the soul.