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Dear my friend lucc I am grad to heard you will come to China and vist me. when I heard the new I can not sleep will in this days. If you don not mind that I make a plane for you visiting my hometown, I want to tell you the plan and please give me your suggestions. My hometown loacked in the east of Henan provience. She is a bigest farme in the middle of China, so, you will visit the beautifully farme. Oh, my god, I forgtot that you had not tell me when you coming? sorry, is my failure. But it does not matter, if you came here in spring, there have a lot of flowers besides the no name river, simer the pink flower and heard the bird voice. I think it is beautifull things. If you choose the time in summer, i think you will love my hometown. There will havest the wheast, hundred track and cut machines will work together for the havest.
