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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第3套):立刻得出结论

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:15浏览次数:40889
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题目:看到什么、听到什么就立刻得出结论是不明智的。
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Are you meet this situatin where you always make a conclusion imitatly when you see something.when I was young ,I did,but one thing changed me.I had a good friend,kara,a beautiful girl at my age of ten.one day,I heared sommeone say that she is bad girl due to she a thief.So,I left from her and don't keep in touch with her.After 2 years ago, I got the truth that she is not a thief and just someone who hate her make a rumour.How stupid I am! My story show that it is not wise to make a conclusion imitatly once we see and hear something.because something we see and hear may be not true.if we conclude by that ,we can fault. Believe truth and decide carefully,our life will be more fine.

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