使用了部分简单的长难句,可适当增加一些复杂的长句;文中衔接词丰富;文中词汇表达较为灵活,高级词汇需要加强,单词拼写要认真。
Do you meet this situation where you always draw conclusion immitately when you see something.when I was young ,I did,but one thing changed me.I had a good friend,kara,a beautiful girl at my age of ten.one day,I heared sommeone say that she is a bad girl because she a thief.So,I left from her and don't keep in touch with her.After 2 years ago, I got the truth that she was not a thief and just someone who hated her to make a rumour.How stupid I am! My story show that it is not wise to come to a conclusion right away, once we see and hear something.because things we see and hear may not be true.if we conclude by that ,we can error. Believe truth and decide carefully,our life will be better.
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