作者有一定功底,可在平时练习中增加长难句的记忆;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者词汇表达较丰富,高级词汇需继续加强,拼写检查要重视。
Do you meet this situation where you always draw conclusion immediately when you see something.when I was young ,I did,but one thing changed me.I had a good friend,kara,a beautiful girl at my age of ten.one day,I heared sommeone say that she is a bad girl because she a thief.So,I left her and don't keep in touch with her.After 2 years ago, I got the truth that she was not a thief and just someone who hated her to make a rumour.How stupid I am! My story show that it is not wise to come to a conclusion right away, once we see and hear something.because things we see and hear may not be true.if we conclude by that ,we can error. Believe truth and decide carefully,our life will be better.
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