2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

作者词汇表达较为熟练，高级词汇使用不是很多；作者句法知识很棒，适当增加从句的使用，会取得更不错的成绩；文章层次较为清晰。

I'm very glad that you are going to my hometown,I wish you have a good time there. As you know,my hometown is a beautiful place,there are lots of kind people and interesting thing.In the morning,we go to see the sun rise when we climbed the mountain,and we all breath the fresh air.You will feel the world is so fine.At lunch,you are eating the delicious food in the countryside.after the lunch,you can talk about something with farm.I believe it's pleased.and then you have a good the time of sleep so that you can have fun in the afternoon.In the afternoon,we go for a walk in the river.the water is refreshing and it's cool while you put hands in the water.Of course,you see some butterfly and bird in the file.I'm sure you fall in love with this place.After walking about some time we need to go home. In a word,this is a day in the countryside.I wish you are coming here soon.