作者词汇表达较为熟练,高级词汇使用不是很多;可适当增加长句和复杂句的使用;全文结构较为严谨。
I am very glad that you are going to visit my hometown,and wish you have a good time there. As you know,my hometown is a beautiful place,there are lots of kind people and some interesting things.In the morning,we go to see the place where the sun rise when we climbed the mountain,and we all breath the fresh air.You will feel the world is so fine.At lunch,you have been eating the delicious food in the countryside.and then you can talk about something with farmers.I believe it's pleased.and then you have a good nap time so that you could have relaxed in the afternoon.In the afternoon,we go for a walk in the river.the water is refreshing and it's cool while you put your hands into the water.Of course,you see some butterfly and bird in the file.I'm sure you fall in love with this place.After walking about some time we need to go home. In a word,this is a day in the countryside.I wish you are coming here soon.