托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第22篇:年轻人比老年人更会享受生活

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It seems that the belief young people enjoy life more than older people do has become a general understanding, for the reasons like young people have more energy and physically more active, although physical features do have an influence on people's life, I do believe there are also some other factors to determine whether people of young age or older age enjoy life more. Fist, there's no doubt that older people have lived longer, and those long life give them quite a lot life experience, and different view of seeing things. Young people might just take the quiet and preoccupied behavior of older people as boring and anxiety, I think different. As I drove my little cousin to the same collage I went to just one year after my graduation, all the familiar feelings came into my mind step by step, the same gate, the buildings I use to joint my class, the path I used to walk on my first date, I could't held to tell him about the courses I used to tend and the teachers who has a sense of humor and those who are strict. Later on as we stand on the top of the highest building in the campus with views all in our eyesight, I stopped, for all the memories that feels like real came through so quick that it feels like I have never left, even with the feelings that I maybe met my friends downstairs. It stopped when my cousin asked what's wrong, it suddenly reminded me of asking the same question to my grandpa when he took me to the harbor he used to worked. I was excited about the enormous ships while he was simply stood there starting into the dock without a single word came out of his mouth. That question hit me, you see, when older people see something or some scene, they are not only enjoying the present, but also experiencing the past, and that is an unusual for young people. And as for more, older people can easily feel a sense of achievement compare to young people.For instance, an aged architect who has numbers of designs that had built up or a musician who can enjoy work he had done in the early years. On the other hand, young people's expectations are always higher than what they are doing now,cause there's still long way to go.Besides achievements, young people worries more than elders, things have always been a thorn in their side, like paying for credit cards, where the career goes, decisions that might determine the future, while the elders have less things to worry about for what done is done, nothing much to do about it, nothing to worry about as well. In summary, as all those factors that might effect our life and all those people live very differently, it is not certain that young people enjoy life more than older people do. It seems that people can enjoy life in different ways, what matters is try to enjoy the present, neither complain about the past, nor be despair of the future.