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文章在句法方面做的很棒，从句和复杂句的使用不错；文中词汇表达比较多样，能多用高级词汇就更好了；文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词，结构比较严谨。
I am very glad that you are going to visit my hometown,and wish you have a good time there. As you know,my hometown is a beautiful place,there many good people and some interesting things.In the morning,we go to see the place where the sun rise when we climbed the mountain,and we all breath the fresh air.You will feel the world is so fine.At lunch,you have been eating the delicious food in the countryside.and then you can talk about something with farmers.I believe it's pleasing while both of the culture constantly melt with the process.and then you have a good nap time so that you could have relaxed in the afternoon.In the afternoon,we go for a walk in the river.The water is refreshing and it's cool while you put your hands into the water.Of course,you see some butterflies dancing and birds singing in the tree.I'm sure you fall in love with this place.After walking about three hours we can go to somewhere else.such as In a word,this is a day in the countryside.I wish you are coming here soon.
