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2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题(69)写作:我的朋友李雷

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Name: Li Lei                    

Age:14

Likes: basketball, swimming, drawing, music

Favorite star: Michael Jordan         

Favorite food: fish and chips

Appearance: short and straight hair, big eyes, medium, height

Wants: a basketball player


I have a good friend,   
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Summer vacation is coming now!I am so excited.These are my vacation plans.First of all.Because I was so busy and tired in these days when the final exam would come.Now I really want to take a rest.Then I can go to play basketball with my friends,I can go hiking and go swimming.I have much time to do what I want to do.But it doesn't mean that I will play all the time.Instead,I not only enjoy my vacation but also spend some time doing some housework.And I plan to make some conversations with my parents in order to tell them my plans of my high school life.It is necessary to listen to their advice too.Besides,I'll take part in some social activities.Such as helping old people or some disabled people.I think it will improve my understanding of the society.

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